Transatlantic tunnel

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steelbug
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Transatlantic tunnel

Post by steelbug » 04 Oct 2011, 19:57

Hi!
This is my first job completely created in XSI
Waiting for criticism. Waiting for comments
Happy viewing
Thanks

History

The first World War had never happened or we dont know anything about it.
Transnational corporations are fighting for the transportation market between Europe and America
Shipping transport is in the lead
There are more and more capacious and comfortable steamships are under construction
But, new technology of steam production - double boiler, which has been patented by one of the railway companies,
allowed to build a tunnel under the Atlantic and take the lead of transportations
"Titanic" became a victim of transcorporation fight

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ActionArt
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Re: Transatlantic tunnel

Post by ActionArt » 05 Oct 2011, 16:12

I think this is pretty spectacular and an interesting concept. A great deal of very nice modeling there. I especially like the steam.

The only suggestion I have is a small one. I say rough up the specular on the front wheel guards a bit, it just doesn't seem to fit the rest.

Great job :)

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Re: Transatlantic tunnel

Post by Zafar Iqbal » 05 Oct 2011, 17:09

Awesome work. I'm loving it. That steam looks amazing :-o

As for criticism: How about some fog/haze/smoke in the background? Looks a bit too "clean". It might help to fill in some more mood.
- Zafar Iqbal

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Re: Transatlantic tunnel

Post by steelbug » 05 Oct 2011, 20:28

Thank you for your interest in my work.
This is not the last job.
I will still work.
I will try to do the work without any errors.
I do wonder, steampunk is a big topic for the search))

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Re: Transatlantic tunnel

Post by gustavoeb » 19 Oct 2011, 16:57

WOW! Seems like you are off to a great start in XSI.
Congrats mate, looks beautiful
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ActionArt
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Re: Transatlantic tunnel

Post by ActionArt » 19 Oct 2011, 17:55

Any updates :D

When you're done you should send that in to 3D World Mag and 3D Artist.

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Re: Transatlantic tunnel

Post by milanvasek » 27 Oct 2011, 19:27

i love all the detail in modeling. its impressive. but maybe you could spend a little bit more time with lighting. something more atmospheric, dramatic. to focus viewers attention to the train and guide him a little bit in the image. now it seems quite flat and such great scene deserves more :)
Milan Vasek
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