The Jones Files - original work

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 14 Sep 2014, 04:59

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shot 3, shot 4 in progress

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have to upload a finished shot 4.... shot 5 halfway done. that's all I can do until page 3 gets sent in.

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 14 Sep 2014, 05:21

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and the last, shot five
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curious if anyone took the time to read the script ;o)

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 17 Sep 2014, 19:39

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Finished final five shot. Although I forgot to add the flapping tie and elbow angle.

it's kind of close...

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 15 Oct 2014, 22:42

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I have the rough beginning of an introduction sequence planned..This would be the shows Logo with a rough title card idea.

one thing I miss with shows these days is a good theme song with a great intro, and once we get a few pages under our belt, the intro will be story boarded next showing the basic idea of how trevor got started and what he's all about, all in 40 seconds.


updated with intro

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 25 Oct 2014, 23:44

updated the video with a Temporary Intro and credit sequence music track.

The Intro will start off with the sale of the light house/apartment to Trevor, and detail the building of his under ground lab. Working on the secret inventions....Witnessing the trouble of the series leading lady on TV....flying off to save her and that's how the intro ends...basically telling the story of the first episode with a little bit of back story in under one minute.

For the end credit sequence, it will feature a nice romantic dinner between the two leads and end in a decent dance sequence.....


If someone out there in crazy hollywood land likes it enough to buy it, the plan would be to change the intro and credit sequence every season for as long as it's on. but that's looking a tad too far ahead ;o)...

just showing folks there is a long run game plan here :)

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 30 Oct 2014, 07:04

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Finally liking what I have for the main home stead. I want this to be a fully functional model....to be able to take the camera into the house and see all the designed rooms, down into the lab entrance and see the lab itself...

but first the house interior and lab itself still needs to be designed


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Might have went over board on back rock detail......but, that was 5 hours worth it..

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 05 Apr 2015, 01:02

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now that I have page three in hand... working on some jones stuff... The Dr.Bob Bot Walker is now done, minus inside detail. now to try and finalize dr.bob.

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 24 Apr 2015, 04:45

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Meet Dr.Bob. it doesn't look ascool as the 2D blue print, but it's a start.

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 19 Aug 2015, 05:48

finally stopping the procrastination and trying to design base Wade Newman model. will go back and fix up trevor a little bit too..

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Hirazi Blue » 19 Aug 2015, 08:39

The male head is looking good, the female seems to need some work.
Maybe instead of render regions you could post shaded wireframes with headlight enabled...
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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 20 Aug 2015, 05:29

I tried to improve the guy in the latest post, but it didn't look as good as that... not that that looks good, but at my skill level it's passable.
the girl is still a work in progress..about 80% all detail...

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 25 Aug 2015, 01:23

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here is one for the original model. as you can tell, I am in the process of cleaning it up tremendously ;o)

will post the newer one soon.

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 25 Aug 2015, 05:10

87% there. almost but not quite

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done...but need a color scheme..
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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Draise » 25 Aug 2015, 15:57

Tron 1.0.

Good progress. ;)

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Rork » 26 Aug 2015, 12:40

I have to admit, you have some serious patience and perseverance, to start something like this after you finished your Turtles movie. :)

Good luck on this project too.

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Re: The Jones Files - original work

Post by Shredder565 » 26 Aug 2015, 16:59

when you have no life, no girlfriend, and modern technology seems to have closed all the places you used to visit to relax (bookstores, anyone?)...I need projects to stop from going further insane ;o)...


As requested.. hope it's not too small to see. the jacket is a bit of a mess
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