PoustEx - A Quick Look at the Short Film Production

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PoustEx - A Quick Look at the Short Film Production

Post by cristiano.policarpo » 05 Feb 2014, 02:23

Hi guys,

Here you can give a quick look at what we are doing in PoustEx short film, using Softimage.



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PoustEx website: http://www.poustex.com

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Post by cristiano.policarpo » 06 Feb 2014, 12:38

New PoustEx Teaser Poster.

Many thanks to Anto Matkovic, his incredible Kristinka Hair compounds helped us a lot to control the strands.

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Re: PoustEx - A Quick Look at the Short Film Production

Post by Daniel Brassard » 06 Feb 2014, 15:19

Look nice, good luck on the project.

My only critique would be on the poster, the Girl has crossed eyes! Don't know if this is intended but a bit disturbing for a casual observer. You may want to engage the observer a bit more by having her look at the viewer as well.

(see poster of Pixar Monster University as an example)

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Re: PoustEx - A Quick Look at the Short Film Production

Post by cristiano.policarpo » 06 Feb 2014, 16:51

Daniel Brassard wrote:Look nice, good luck on the project.

My only critique would be on the poster, the Girl has crossed eyes! Don't know if this is intended but a bit disturbing for a casual observer. You may want to engage the observer a bit more by having her look at the viewer as well.

(see poster of Pixar Monster University as an example)

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Daniel, thanks for your comment!

Yes, you're right. But our intention is that she is looking the green light at the top of the PoustEx's antenna.

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Re: PoustEx - A Quick Look at the Short Film Production

Post by Daniel Brassard » 06 Feb 2014, 19:49

Our intention is that she is looking the green light at the top of the PoustEx's antenna.
Ha, this is intentional then ..... Did not see the little green light until you pointed it out.

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Re: PoustEx - A Quick Look at the Short Film Production

Post by dwigfor » 06 Feb 2014, 21:26

The cross-eyes bothers me too. If she must look at the light (I also didn't notice that), I would cheat her right eye pupil over toward her right so she doesn't look cross-eyed. I would also accentuate her pose to show her looking at it.

But I think it'd be better to face the audience, especially for a poster.

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