Construction Worker
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Great work overall.
My crits would be regarding the angry expression - it's a bit too forced IMO. I don't think I ever saw someone raising their lip so high (perhaps with the exception of Stallone LOL)
Also the last pic with the wonder face - the eyes seem to have a weird shape at the lower eyelid, like a non-uniform curvature.
Anyway, looking great as I said.
My crits would be regarding the angry expression - it's a bit too forced IMO. I don't think I ever saw someone raising their lip so high (perhaps with the exception of Stallone LOL)
Also the last pic with the wonder face - the eyes seem to have a weird shape at the lower eyelid, like a non-uniform curvature.
Anyway, looking great as I said.
The society that separates its scholars from its warriors will have its thinking done by cowards and its fighting done by fools.
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Latest update. Just a few more tweeks on the hair, and the lips left to do.
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awesome work izze!!!!!
real epic stuff!
my favorite is the last image on the right with her eyes closed. really nice expression
real epic stuff!
my favorite is the last image on the right with her eyes closed. really nice expression
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Re: Construction Worker
Very Good, Izze. Your are getting there, the hairs look better .
As a suggestion, close the eyes a bit in the second pics, especially the top eyelids in a more restfull, natural pose. The top eyelid should cover the iris a bit. Full Open eyes are for surprised/amazed or scared expressions.
When you do so, drop the eyebrows a bit as well in the middle. Same for the third picture, the curve is too pronounce and does not match the rest of the expression.
See pics attached.
I like the last picture. If you open the eyes a bit you could make her look down like she is welding something.
As a suggestion, close the eyes a bit in the second pics, especially the top eyelids in a more restfull, natural pose. The top eyelid should cover the iris a bit. Full Open eyes are for surprised/amazed or scared expressions.
When you do so, drop the eyebrows a bit as well in the middle. Same for the third picture, the curve is too pronounce and does not match the rest of the expression.
See pics attached.
I like the last picture. If you open the eyes a bit you could make her look down like she is welding something.
Last edited by Daniel Brassard on 07 Jan 2014, 14:28, edited 2 times in total.
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Thanks Daniel and Ibra,
I finally got the hair to my liking. I tweaked a few other elements and I think I have taken this as far as I can for now. All the comments helped make the final much better. Thanks!
I finally got the hair to my liking. I tweaked a few other elements and I think I have taken this as far as I can for now. All the comments helped make the final much better. Thanks!
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Love it/her!
The first and the fourth image to me are the most striking. The first expression as being very "over the top" and the fourth because it would seem to indicate some kind of contemplative mood (dare I say prayer?), contrasting the other poses quite well IMHO.
The first and the fourth image to me are the most striking. The first expression as being very "over the top" and the fourth because it would seem to indicate some kind of contemplative mood (dare I say prayer?), contrasting the other poses quite well IMHO.
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i like her... great work...
but the eyball is to big... in real world scale they are only 24-25mm and thats nearly the size of the eye socket...
and the iris is around 11mm...
i would take the measurements of a real girl near you from cheek to cheek...
scale the head and the eyes to the right size...
but the eyball is to big... in real world scale they are only 24-25mm and thats nearly the size of the eye socket...
and the iris is around 11mm...
i would take the measurements of a real girl near you from cheek to cheek...
scale the head and the eyes to the right size...
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top Images from right to left:
1. She heard softimage was acquired by Microsoft - still could sleep at night
2. Now she heard Avid bought Softimage - a little worried, but looking a head for the future...
3. what you said??? Autodesk bought softimage? oh no...
4. (5 years later) WTF??? are you drunk Autodesk??? F@#k you Autodesk!
1. She heard softimage was acquired by Microsoft - still could sleep at night
2. Now she heard Avid bought Softimage - a little worried, but looking a head for the future...
3. what you said??? Autodesk bought softimage? oh no...
4. (5 years later) WTF??? are you drunk Autodesk??? F@#k you Autodesk!
Re: Construction Worker
Perfect work!!
How did you get such a realisitc skin?
How did you get such a realisitc skin?
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Incredible. =)
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